Comments : Neverland

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    This is a wonderful yet saddening piece.
    The flow and rhyming are perfect.

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Alec

      So I have a special ace in my heart for Neverland, Oz, and Wonderland. My two friends and I wrote of the three. This is an amazing piece. You're very talented. Sad, but beautiful.

  • 8 years ago

    by Lost One

    So Alec ''Honor4saken'' pointed me here and... wow. You are a great writer! I'll be following.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ren

    What a fantastic write!!

    "Hesitation; brought on by myself,
    But it never meant I didn't love you.
    So in Neverland I'll wait forever,
    For the next time you fly on through."
    ^^
    Absolutely love these lines!! Amazing job!

    • 8 years ago

      by AnnaCG

      Thank you! :)

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is a beautiful write, Anna. Such a sad tale but beautifully told.

  • 8 years ago

    by Fredy RoMa0u Sanchez

    I'll carve a new heart from stone.

    ^Amazing line.... it blew me away in the context of the poem... gret work

  • 8 years ago

    by gopi nath

    The best one nice keep going ahead