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This is a wonderful yet saddening piece.
The flow and rhyming are perfect.
So I have a special ace in my heart for Neverland, Oz, and Wonderland. My two friends and I wrote of the three. This is an amazing piece. You're very talented. Sad, but beautiful.
by Lost One
So Alec ''Honor4saken'' pointed me here and... wow. You are a great writer! I'll be following.
What a fantastic write!!
"Hesitation; brought on by myself,
But it never meant I didn't love you.
So in Neverland I'll wait forever,
For the next time you fly on through."
Absolutely love these lines!! Amazing job!
Thank you! :)
This is a beautiful write, Anna. Such a sad tale but beautifully told.
by Fredy RoMa0u Sanchez
I'll carve a new heart from stone.
^Amazing line.... it blew me away in the context of the poem... gret work
by gopi nath
The best one nice keep going ahead