Pain
by Heather Oct 8, 2016
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Life is nothing without pain and sorrow can it be we cannot live without out it. So shall it be it stay with us so we know we still have a soul. |
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9 years agoby Em
Hi, welcome to P&Q.
This is deep and I think we cannot live without pain because it does help us to deal with things in life.
The only thing is you have written 'without out' I think the out is not needed.
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9 years ago
by Heather
Thank you. And ya your right the second out is not needed. Again thank you
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