Comments : Repeating Without Repeating Myself

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Mad! The maddening thing is I relate to your 'mad'

    The question is mad, or is it madder? Madder than me, or you? Surely not, that would be plain, madness?

  • 7 years ago

    by ether

    Okay so I wouldn't normally say this as a compliment - but this did not flow at all haha. But in the best way, because I had to concentrate so hard on the repetitious repeats of repetitive themes. This piece grabbed me and pulled me in and also perplexed me, which I'm sure is your goal here. Well executed, and very clever.

    As an aside, I've also been thinking the same thing - my own writing/life has a great deal of repeated themes that present in slightly varied patterns (or words/poems) but it's always the same thing over and over again.
    The joys of being blessed with Sisyphus, I suppose ;)

    Well done.

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    You lost me some where along the lines and this repeating oneself they say is good for you are reminding yourself but at the same time it can be annoying too! :) All in all your poems are always interesting to read!