Comments : How To Predict Your Future (Day 3)

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Gel,

    So day 3 already. I like what you are trying to say, but where has the 5 lsyllables per line disappeared to? I would love to see you hone this into your strict form.

    If the bridge isn't there to help, you best make a blueprint to show you the way.

    Only a suggestion, Gel. Either way it's sound advice.

    Take care,

    Michael x

    • 9 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Yah Sir Michael my brain didn't work well lol ...tomorrow I'll stick to my form. .. I know you're clever to notice. ..

  • 9 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Beautifully said Gel!

  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    So very true Gel, words to live by. Well done-