Comments : Five lines drawn from the deep (Day 4)

  • 9 years ago

    by hiraeth

    "And an alcohol, "

    try "and some alcohol" instead, flows better.

    that said, remind me to never cross your bad side!

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    As mark said never let me cross you haha

  • 9 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Well done Gel!
    A nice fun short piece.
    I agree with the others, id like to stay on your good side haha

    • 9 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hahaha don't worry ... its just an all mouth no trousers. .. so don't be afraid

  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    Wow Gel-I am so glad I am on your good side-lol...I am on your good side, right??? I really liked this a lot, it's something that has crossed my mind a time or two.