Sun (Acrostic + Senyru)

by stormingdance (Lessa)   Nov 2, 2016


Sonnets can't compete
Under milky skies - waking
Nebulas within

    report violation
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  • 9 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Well done :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    This is wonderful

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Damn it, woman, I disagree! Sonnets can compete with anything! lol

    Once again, your mixing of forms is eye-opening and wonderful to read,

    All the best,

    Ben

    • 9 years ago

      by stormingdance (Lessa)

      Haha! I noticed your preference for sonnets so I am not surprised! Thanks again!

  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    Jessica, such a lovely write. I think it's so cool you put together an acrostic and senryu and in such a beautiful way. Well done-

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