Mahal,

Your expert use of language and form really does have the power to mesmerise and never more so than in this nostalgic and rather moving write.

I hope this nominated - I'm out this week!

Take care,

Ben

Hi Dash,

No doubt you're an excellent writer, on how you put in words all your feelings.

Your brilliance used to stain
this broken town with orange,
you were a sunset
drifting across trances
and flowing stars...

Astonishing imaginary...

GBU
Ate Gel

This is just lovely! So much yearning in every line.

Mesmerising

Edit: Congrats on the win

Congratulations on the Win!! Sorry am late with my comments and as always your writes has that punch and flavor to grasp readers...keep penning~

Absolutely lovely!