Comments : Orange

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Mahal,

    Your expert use of language and form really does have the power to mesmerise and never more so than in this nostalgic and rather moving write.

    I hope this nominated - I'm out this week!

    Take care,

    Ben

  • 5 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi Dash,

    No doubt you're an excellent writer, on how you put in words all your feelings.

    Your brilliance used to stain
    this broken town with orange,
    you were a sunset
    drifting across trances
    and flowing stars...

    Astonishing imaginary...

    GBU
    Ate Gel

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    This is just lovely! So much yearning in every line.

  • 5 years ago

    by Em

    Mesmerising

    Edit: Congrats on the win

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Congratulations on the Win!! Sorry am late with my comments and as always your writes has that punch and flavor to grasp readers...keep penning~

  • 5 years ago

    by yogi73

    Absolutely lovely!