Comments : Life (acrostic)

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Very very true and wise words Brenda unfortunately. It seems one for all and all for one is a distant memory!

    Em

    • 9 years ago

      by Brenda

      I hear that Em, it is sad indeef.

  • 9 years ago

    by Mayday

    Ugh! My thoughts exactly x_x Terrifying times, Brenda...with everything being so up in the air...nobody knowing what to expect and with this country seemingly more divided than ever *Sighs* Crossing fingers here and praying like hell! I guess that's all we really CAN do.
    A contemplative and truthful poem.

    • 9 years ago

      by Brenda

      I totally agree, scary times out here for all of us. Thank you!

  • 9 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Very true Brenda! Well done.

    • 9 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thanks Naomi, I wish it wasn't true-

  • 9 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    We all wish it wasnt true! but the world we live in these days is a sad one indeed. We are all surviving!

    • 9 years ago

      by Brenda

      We are indeed. I guess that says something about us. I keep the faith-Thanks N!

  • 9 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Brenda,

    A truthful piece. ...even this is just a simple one but it kick bucket

  • 9 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Both the poem and title is matching with each other. A very nice expression of life.

    Well done.

    • 9 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much!

  • 8 years ago

    by Lucifer

    If Micheal is acrostic king, you are definitely the acrostic queen.
    I love those poems where poet uses simple words and turn them into gems with the touch of their hands.

    Great message for us, Brenda.
    Life is about living in harmony.

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much for your kind words! Acrostic are fun, it makes you take limitations and word play with it. If you haven't done these you really should. I get a lot out of them .hugs-

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Languishing on this beach
    I know each day will bring
    fantasies, the Gods of Greek
    evoking dreams of wings

    Have a lovely day, Brenda. Your acrostics rock! xx

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Awww, thank you so much Michael! You made my day! :)