Gel, this is amazing! It starts out sad with this awful person in your life and I see you taking back what is yours and renewed faith. Just wonderful-Hugs-

Gel excellent write! Well done :)
5/5 from me!

Well done on this, Gel; one of your best, I feel. It has a story, imagery and some good slant rhyming. Great stuff,

Ben

Gel, this is one of your best pieces is far.
Its very powerful
Those first lines, wow. Fab imagery

Em

All that glitter is never gold. Pretence is the weakest lie told. Against all odds, victory abounds. A worthwhile assurance, ma'am Gel!

Wow great write Gel

Gel, Gel, Gel...

This is amazing! The intensity, emotion and imagery leaps from the page. There is darkness and fading colour that instills sadness and anger too. Like with all traumatic events there is calm and time to regroup. This will never happen again.

Well done,

Michael x