Well written and beautifully expressed. The feeling of love that feels like it's can't be put into words or thoughts. Amazing work

Very good, Lucero. I do have a couple of pointers, in terms of the meter, though.

"unawarely" - UN a WARE ly

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This means the iambic meter is off in this line as the first syllable is stressed.

Also, "spellbound" - SPELL bound

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This means that line ends with an unstressed syllable.

As to the content, I have always believed that love is what's left after passion's fire is spent; we cannot base love on the initial ecstasy - that is a simple charade. The 'calming' feeling seems to me a far more reliable symptom.

Well done, these aren't easy. I've just written one myself with the alternate cdecde
rhyme scheme at the end. (Not posted yet)

All the best,

Ben

No problem, Lucero.

As to my sonnet, I have to admit to finding the flow in Italian sonnets a little harder to achieve, especially with the cdecde finish...so don't expect too much, lol

Take care

Beautiful

Very beautiful