Comments : Restrained

  • 7 years ago

    by Everlasting

    The nothing is straving? Or starving?

    I'm not sure I'm familiar with the word straving or if it's a word, sorry, I haven't looked it up in the dictionary. I think it may be a typo.

    I don't like drinking. Sober is the way to go.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A mesmerising write, really well executed.

    All the very best,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi,
    A nicely written poem

    how a word sound if whispered
    how a firm one' won't be found
    sober 'till the end
    ^^^^

    I love it. ...well done

  • 7 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    Thank you all :)