Beautiful as always

Hello Meena,

A beautiful description of love pangs, missing a lover who is far away. It's almost as if the strength of love can traverse any distance, making their feelings known to their intended.

Well done,

Michael x

Meena,

this is lovely. ..you made me long for love. .hahaha I honestly like this. ..very nice description Meena....

Well done
.Gel

Meena,

The visuals in this are wonderful. It's rich and fluent to read and a write I enjoyed immensely.

All the best,

Ben

Beautiful write Meena :)

I love the format of this piece!

Wow I am awe struck with this poem. It's so beautiful, who could have expressed love transcending distance better then you did here. No one I say.

Awesome write! The longing is indeed forever.
Wonderful work, filled with emotion.

5/5, greatly penned! I read it over and over.

Cheers,
Ray

Hello Meena,

It feels like an age since I have commented on a poem of yours. I am sorry!

This poem is a lovely little nugget. It manages to convey in 3 short stanza - distance, loss, grief and so much more besides.

In the 1st stanza, you mention distance apart, but how the heart will travel. The word trek suggests, that although the heart (love) will travel willingly, it is a hard going journey.

The 2nd stanza, I like particularly the yawn of the days. Days spent missing someone are long days, feeling very stretched, much like a face that yawns, perhaps? These days a tiring; and if it were not for that embrace, it would feel impossible.

The last stanza, I felt like I was on a coach or a train journey; just gazing out of the window, watching, 'sheets of leaves' pass me by, traveling to my ultimate destination; the one that my hearts desires most. To be with you once more.

Meena, I enjoyed this poem and will try not to return sooner this time.

((hugs)) xx

Very poem

Lovely!

This feels familiar. I enjoyed the read.