Maher.. beautiful and sad.. ive nominated

Maher, wonderfully written. So much at odds with oneself.

Clever layout Maher

It's cold, I
could never imagine your warmth; I
already feel out of control. I
nearly fell into your norm; I
try as I might on my own. I
^^
perfect

don(e) only what I'll ever need; I
^^
typo I guess

open my roads all alone. I
trust only the ones who I heed; I
hold every control over fear. I
^^ perfect

instill (instil) only good in my will; I've

^^typo error again

silently conquered the years.
^^
a powerful ending

well done Maher

Gel

Living the life of a minimalist doesn't work well with love I guess.

A very powerful write..

Hello,

This poem has a fresh feel to it, the purposely placed 'i' gift a look that I found appealing. This poetic tool is not unique, but here it looks contemporary. The rhyme is subtle, and perhaps, I would have liked the piece to be more 'in your face gushy' I do appreciate that is my style and that actually the poem speaks volumes in style and form.

Well done,

Michael

Very powerful write maher.
Great job!

Maher,

Nice poem from you. ..and I like the layout ...you put all Your "I's" on the right. ..

I
instil only good in my will; I've
silently conquered the years.
^^
my favourite lines

Gel

I commented on this already but I really like it so I came back for this

Fantastic write!