Hello Deeply,

I liked this on the club thread. It led me as I read to think the voice is from the grave, but, unlike the dead who travel onto the next destination - this 'ghoul' is 'forever' trapped in this torment by its own 'graveyard'.

Wonderfully gripping.

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Take care,

Michael x

I really like this one. It reminds me of a dream I had a long time ago that was very similar. Scary as hell, but very similar. The perspective given from the person in the grave is a creepy one, mostly because people really don't know what happens in the beyond the physical level. Very awesome USB :)

This is very eerie but well written.

Em

Wow, I got chills reading this. Well written and very emotional. Well done.

Naomi,

Goosebumps from my head down to my feet. .. I like this very much and the emotions you pour to this piece. ...

Well done

Gel

N, I loved this in our club challenge and re-reading it again just gave me the shivers. To be in such pain and no-one can hear you and not realizing until later you are actually dead-mind blowing....kaw boom! (that's my mind being blown). Well done N!

Naomi,

This was an excellent write the first time round and I can tell you it pushed the runner-up spot very close.

Well done on this,

Ben