Comments : I cant

  • 8 years ago

    by Kasie

    Wow such a strong emotional piece. I felt the pain from every word. No one should ever have to go through so much emotional pain.

    • 8 years ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      I agree. However I myself am not perfect. I've hurt people too, and I'm not
      Proud of it

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A very powerful piece.

    I've read your reply to Kasie and all I can say is that at least you own up to it and are honest. Some people spend a whole lifetime hurting others and seeing no wrong in their actions or simply not caring.

    Take care,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      Thank you Ben.
      No. Nobody is perfect, and I do not wish to be remembered by my mistakes. I want to make a difference, but I don't always make the right decisions.

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Beautiful.. this is beautiful.. :) i love it. Well done

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is honest and raw full of emotional pain and I can feel it with every word you write as for you not being perfect I believe nobody perfect.

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hello there,

    I love this piece and the flow, very realistic. ...

    Nominated

    Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Wow, this is so sad and raw. This isn't a turn to the bad is it? I thought things were going good for you two? I'm sorry, I feel your pain and you really did a really good job on this-hugs-

    • 8 years ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      It's about an old friend, not my love. I said goodbye to him and just.. god I wish I could hate him after everything. But I can't. Because I've made my own mistakes and I've hurt someone just as much.