This is sweet and beautifully written. Well done you two

Ladies, does Ben. P know you're writing about him again? To be honest it makes my green eyes gleam...

No, you make my mind scream!

Good job and nicely presented. X

Ladies, as Michael alludes to, this is clearly for me and all I can say is that I have ever had that effect on womankind world over, lol

Well done - a lovely piece

Gel, I enjoyed working with you on this and look forward to doing again in the future..

Now Michael/Ben.. What gave us away lol ;)

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Can i just say, of course the boys think this is about them... sorry Benny and Michael.. but its really about me. :P
We all know they both love me more! ;)

haha

girls - well done!! This is brilliant, flawless, the flow is excellent! I cant tell who did what (YAY!!!)
i love the layout!

Well done! its a 10/5 from me!

Ladies, wonderful write! This is such a sweet long distance love write. It flows like a song, well done-

The thing that is making this write amazing is a very good slide of blissful rhyming. Very adorable, peaceful and honest write. 5/5

Nice job from both.

Thanks everyone, means alot :)

Nice poem, wonderful imagination.

What a power shelled in two like minds! Wonder minds, like I always tell.. What manner of heart, you must have; for this very dear dream maker! Who believes finds Life possible.
+1!

Angel and Em...a beautiful collab!