by Hotel Blogger Jan 29, 2017
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
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Dubai dreams, running wild, running free |
by BlueJay
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So firstly, I'd like to welcome you to our lovely little poetic home. And secondly, the energy in this piece is the only thing that kept me interested til the end. I can see a lot of potential in your work, but your style was bland and your lengthy lines were a bit confusing. Your descriptions were hit and miss, but I found your use of colors inviting and your plush words like "lavish" and "luxury" really got your mood across to me. |