Existential Hallucination

by Saakiel   Feb 3, 2017


Brick over bricks,
fragment into fragments,
I hear the night chant people into sleep;
I hear a voice only I could hear.
The trees are looking down at me.
What was I doing?

I stood in narrow lines
as I see my movements across shadows.
I leaned closer to it and
recognize my own strange skin,
a paler one, but more scared.
Who have I become?

I hear the night sing people to lullaby;
I was awake, half-asleep but keener.
The trees are looking down at me,
and the night stayed calm,
but I was never any closer.
How do I become?

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  • 7 years ago

    by Mello193

    first stanza, fifth line, a to at? other than that I really enjoyed reading this. I didn't really understand your flow..

    • 7 years ago

      by Saakiel

      That's supposed to be 'at'. Maybe be you should try harder understanding, or maybe there's no need to.