Not to late

by Ranbow Colour   Feb 17, 2017


Split apart, i'll never be me again!
Till today i realize i'm still apart.
Not forgotten still all those regrets
Principles that only i'll never forget
Hate Hurt ME ME ME
I'm right defiantly!
i was am, but where does it get me?
lost lonely only i see.
to be
growing old
old
just me
they move on, be me
hold tight but to what?
being right?
love gone
years past
time time time time
old
gone!
see now what i knew then
my decisions my zen.
but gone like time eating itself
right or wrong shortly balance showing its self
hold on to my truths only i know
forgiveness is the only way it'll show.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Hamburger-Herm

    Nice. Really like these style of poems. Good job.

  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Fella it's nice to see that you finally joined up!!

    Listen to the other Ben he knows his stuff :)

    I like the format of this one, your word choice too and the repetition (which i'm not always a fan of as it reminds me of some very heavy nights in our youth) is really well placed and not too much, it can over power a piece sometimes and make the reader lose interest but you were spot on :)

    Great job man

    Ben :-)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Welcome to the site.

    This write is quick-fire in its delivery and almost frantic. A joy to read.

    Keep posting and all the best,

    Ben

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