Comments : It's Always the Little Things

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    WOW ! Excellent visuals :)
    Well done

    • 8 years ago

      by Therapoetic4

      Thanks. Sadly, sometimes our better stuff comes from real life.

  • 8 years ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    One again, a great write.
    It is always the little things that mean the most.
    I love this.

    • 8 years ago

      by Therapoetic4

      Thanks. Trying to use poetry to process some intense stuff.

    • 8 years ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      It's a great way to get your emotions out, for sure.
      Keep writing.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Hi, this is fantastic and says so much in such a short space and shows how much you loved this person because 1/ you let them wear your sweat pants and they still hold this noose around your heart which says to me that you are no longer together bit like many of us hold feelings for them.

    Fabulous work,
    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by ddavidd

    So delightfully put!

  • 8 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Loved this,

    Sometimes "you can't untie that knot"

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww, so short but heartbreaking.