Comments : Born in a Cosmic Furnace

  • 2 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    I dont know how people have missed this. IT is truely remarkable!
    Its cute and detailed..

    Well done!

  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    1 word: Nominated!!!!

  • 2 years ago

    by Brenda

    Wonderfully written love poem. What better way to compare your love than with stardust. Well done-

  • 2 years ago

    by Ren

    WOW!
    Amazing write! Educational, romantic, and very sweet! Well done!

  • 2 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Judging Comment:

    While the length is interesting, Alex has managed to captivate the readers with love, beautiful imagery, and fantastic word choice. For a newer writer to PnQ, Alex has managed to earn himself quite a following, this week especially. His voice is pure and flows extremely well throughout this write, and his style is a little but awkward, but somehow that adds personality and interesting little scenes to the story aspect of this piece. Stunning write.

    • 2 years ago

      by Alex Penuelas

      Holy smokes. Wasn't expecting you to do this! Thank you thank you thank you!!