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  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    How heartbreaking :( what a beautiful poem though to express how you feel about it all..

    Well done.

    • 8 years ago

      by Nil

      Thank you for the compliment and it was in fact quite heartbreaking.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Though this is sad as Naomi said its beautifully done and all I can say is at least this person was honest and though it hurts, its better that way I guess. I have been here and it does get better.

    • 8 years ago

      by Nil

      Their honesty was a quality I admired. Thanks for the comment Em.

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    This is so sad but beautifully written.There's nothing worse than having feelings for another who no longer feels the same. You really hit on this perfectly. Thank you for sharing.

    • 8 years ago

      by Nil

      thank you for the comment brenda. and i can agree having your feelings no longer reciprocated >.< is awful

  • 8 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Ah, my heart hurts here. You are honest in your feelings and I know how the heart can be affected by single words such as those. I hope you find a place of healing soon. Take care.

    • 8 years ago

      by Nil

      healing takes time and i'm working on it certainly- thank you for your kind words

  • 8 years ago

    by Pagan Paul

    "Sticks and Stones
    may break my bones,
    but words can never hurt me"
    Believe that and you will win!
    PPx

  • 8 years ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    I'd like this if it didn't remind me so much of someone I know.
    But you wrote it well. Good job

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    This really hurt... It happens and my it takes a lot of courage to get past this phase. Nice write.