Comments : Have you seen her?

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I'm asking everyone in my way:
    "Excuse me, have you seen J?

    ^^

    I love this piece and you have ended it in a suitably dramatic way. Well done indeed,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Fredy RoMa0u Sanchez

      Thank you! I thought maybe the title would take away from the ending.... I'm glad you liked it

  • 8 years ago

    by Lvi

    Loved how you expressed your feelings and the ending is superb.....

    A small typo ..... Just check the spelling of emptiness in the second line.

    Lvi

  • 8 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Wasn't gonna log in tonight as I needed a little brain switched off time.

    Glad I did though as I may have missed this otherwise.

    I don't critique people's work as to do so is not me.

    However!

    This made me think so much about myself, and for this I thank you

    Regards

    Craig

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