by CJ Maleney
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"From A to Z we fill the cage" |
by Ben Pickard
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A well written and well rhymed poem, Meena; cleverly done. I like your use of half rhymes. |
by ddavidd
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Very interesting insight and easy to read. Well penned dear Meena. |
by mossgirl19
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What an insightful read, Meena. Took me to some silent sanctuary. This is beautiful. |
by Sai
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I enjoy reading poems like this. Very clever! How you suggest an image to the reader right at the beginning, with the title. I was thinking of a mosque/church/some other holy place, and then slowly comes the switch at the end. |
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Hi Meena.... Silent, killer poem...you nailed it ! |
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Super cool piece! Definitely enjoyed the depth of your writing. |