I'm so glad you typed this up..... Wow!

Tobias, I too agree with Andrea, I am really glad you typed this up..powerful, full of visuals that aren't for the faint of heart. Well done-

A powerful piece. Well done for pushing through your hangover to write it x

Wow, this is such a great write! Well done!

As I first read through this piece I was wondering if maybe it was written about the holocaust remembrance day (last week I think) but at the end when I saw your note I was amazed even more because you really captured a time and place as well as managed to make this feel more human and gentle than I expected. Very well penned.

Congrats on the win! :)

I really thought this was about the war for your words have beautifully
captured the pain, torture and the mood. Very well done and Congrats
on the Win!

Judging Comment:

For being called a fleeting thought from a hang over, this piece was extremely powerful and well penned. The flow and elegance balanced out the painful nature of this piece. And normally I am not a fan of the lacking punctuation or capitalizations, but it worked in this piece, this choice allowed the piece more fluidity and voice. Absolutely captivating write.