Comments : Your Mamma Don't Dance

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    My song contest entry

  • 6 years ago

    by Lost One

    This made me smile when I first read it in the thread.

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Glad you liked I wanted it to be light hearted but still have a message. It was one of those that virtually wrote itself.

      I got my title and it was submitted ten minutes later or there abouts. I think it was one of the first ones sent in

      Craig

  • 6 years ago

    by Liz

    Love the light heartedness of this write! Glad to see who was behind it!!

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Surprised you never figured it out, itsy very me kinda poem lol

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Liked this piece could be a song as well as a poem x

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Just needs a chorus lol.

      Some of the stuff I've written, were written as lyrics. However I do not have the skills necessary to make them songs, so rhyme they became.

      Quite happy people enjoy them too

      Craig

  • 6 years ago

    by BlueJay

    70s song Contest Comment: The way the author of this piece incorporated different types of dance and the highly personality filled rhyme choices make this piece flow so well. I felt as though there was a rhythm to this that felt as the author was dancing along as they typed this and it was an infectious feeling. And the end of the piece was a very interesting conclusion that left me contemplating the different views and aspects to this piece. Absolutely wonderful write.

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you for your lovely comments. This one, despite how quickly this was written it's one of the few things I've written that I really like.

      Craig