Nice write Larry
Really enjoyed reading

Michael :)

Larry,

I genuinely enjoyed this piece and genuinely took something from it upon finishing. Inspirational.

All the best,

Ben

Larry, truly inspirational ! I couldn't agree more-well done!

Some people cannot find that path
They get lost within those woods
No map for them to follow
No breadcrumbs underfoot

Yet sometimes when it gets dark
When the sun has dipped again
Someone will switch on a light
That helps them find a way

It does not happen often
In truth it's very rare
But nice to know when someone's lost
There are still those out there that care

Don't know where your path goes and I don't
Know where mine leads either.

An inspirational write dude

Craig

Look up! This pathway is not closed;
you are not in a tunnel, blocked ahead;
you are on a trail through dark woods
but the light is above you, hidden merely
by the canopy of leaves high overhead.

^^This is true to some extent. But there are times and there are
those once lost and once hope is lost they can never find the path
or the hidden light. On the other hand there are those who will keep
going till they do.

Overall its an inspirational write for all to read and move with.
Keep penning!

An excellent write full of inspiring words that I truly needed to read today...and I'm sure many others did, too. Beautiful job!

Guys, I appreciate your insights and comments (and responsive poem, Craig). My hope has been that the one it was written for takes heart from it.

Thank you for this very inspirational piece!