Comments : First words

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Whew. Someone is in love. First things first, your imagery is great! Such a sweet piece- everything is described beautifully with love. This has that sweet, subtle atmosphere around it. The 'pace' left me melting a little...it's like becoming sweeter as the poem goes down...until the very last line. Awesome write, Michael!

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss M,

      First love is special, and as its my 100th post it had to be love :)

    • 8 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Congratulations on your 100th poem. :-) Cheers to more!

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael

    Thank you again Miss M,

    ...hopefully, as long as the heart ticks, the poems will tock haha

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Wow Michael,
    This is so cute and magical and had me thinking back to the first time.

    Well done!

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Name
      Lovely little words; )

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautifully written emotional piece and so romantic

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Milly, for really nice words :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ren

    Wow, Michael! This is absolutely lovely and very well written! Congrats on your 100th poem! WOW! :D

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Hey Miss Ren

      Thank you kindly for your wonderful words as ever :)