Comments : Don't Fear The Reaper

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Craig, nicely written, good rhyming throughout. You have some typos but they don't take away from the write. Well done, love the story line!

  • 6 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Craig,
    Well done on this. it flows wonderfully and rhymes are excellent.

    Love the story too.

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Morning guys

    Thanks for your comments glad you enjoyed.

    Bren, I got one type error and corrected but eyes are still tired and bleary (started at 6am and finished at 10pm so long day yesterday ) so I'll look again later

    Regards both

    Craig

    Got em now I've woken up lol

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Ah Mr Reaper does not care. Great rhyming piece fella. Enjoyed reading this one

    Michael :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Phil

    I think we all fear the unknown but really shouldn't

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      I think some do but not all. I don't Fear The unknown in fact there are things I'll bobble along not knowing the answere to quite happily. When the time comes I'll find out then, or I won't.

      Regards

      Craig

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    WOAH!

    This is fantastic, Craig! Kinda sends a shiver up your spine and makes you contemplate life. Glad to see this is nominated! Well done!

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Thank you but it can't hold a candle to your latest

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Wow