by CJ Maleney
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I haven't conveyed this as well as I wanted to. |
by Hope
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Beautiful poem, please keep writing, would love to read more from you.... |
by CJ Maleney
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Morning. And thank you. |
by mossgirl19
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I think Flicker is a great title for this, a small spark like the light of a firefly. If you capture it in the palm of your hand it's really beautiful. But if you missed it, it leaves you a certain feeling of sadness. |
by CJ Maleney
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Not so much sadness more a sense of frustration as you almost had it completed in your head, |
by Meena Krish
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Interesting title and I was expecting something. Its true its that |
by Em
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I have lost many of my pieces when I used to write them on here and the page refreshed (before save edit came) and it's very frustrating because even though I had got it off my chest it still seemed to linger as I hadn't let it go so to speak |
by CJ Maleney
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Totally get what you mean, |
by Allie
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I really like this! |
by CJ Maleney
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Thank you, it's kinda an odd one but it felt right |