I really like this. Uniquely structured and the content exploring vulnerability.

This is majestic

Never give up on that feeling, Mel. You are too young to withdraw entirely from the the game of love - even if it is the most dangerous one we can play. Yes, the stakes are high and we risk so much...but that's because of the massive potential rewards.

Thank God you have started to dream again.
I mean as long as you are dreaming, we will get to read such beautiful poems.
So keep on dreaming and never quit, because the day you stop, it will become hard for us to breathe.
We are addicted to your poems.

Miss Mel :)

Keep your dreams flowing and magic coming with pieces of writing like this

Well done

Michael :)

A delightful work.

I think love is knocking at your heart and I know you won't take much long letting it come in.

The time has come to dream, to fly,
and to touch the sky.

What a lovely piece to read Mel

Lovely write ,I enjoyed every bit to the last word.

Oh wow, I absolutely, positively, most definitely love this piece! It's hopeful and real.... please dream on if it means you'll give us more poems like this one