Really good poetic description on the lows and struggles of alcoholism! Nice one mate

Wow! nams
I could feel the downward spiral in this piece, very eerie and descriptive. Brilliantly constructed with the rawness of your emotions, within enemy lines!

Much love and hope

Michael x

This hits hard a very raw and difficult piece to write but I admire your bravery and regardless of what you think your strength <3

A painful look into addiction, very raw. Thank you for sharing with us!

-Mandy

I enjoyed this a lot, this resd like a spoken word poem. Which in my opinion makes it great.

Edit- If i could nominate this i would. This deserves it.

Wow...wonderfully visual vibrant descent into addiction. Powerful and thought inspiring piece that tugs at the readers emotions
"Save me from myself before I fall too far"
Reiterates the depth of hell and torment caused by addiction. An excellent read. I hope someone nominates it. Definitely deserves a nomination

Wow...wonderfully visual vibrant descent into addiction. Powerful and thought inspiring piece that tugs at the readers emotions
"Save me from myself before I fall too far"
Reiterates the depth of hell and torment caused by addiction. An excellent read. I hope someone nominates it too it deserves to be nominated.

Nams, what a very profound portrayal of the evil of addiction... Terrific visuals, I saw the Devil himself grinning. Yes, this truly deserves nomination. Great write here.

Everything we need to know is already present in us.
The door is already there, but it's you and only you who can unlock it-no one else can.
And another truth is that without falling too deep you can't even find the door.

So falling is good, just fall in the right place.