This made me overcome with so much emotion! I'll come back and comment properly later

Mark the winds must always be free from you! A beautiful piece that resonates deeply for those I have lost this way x
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Beautiful! :)

Mark as far as I know the moment we die we do not remember anything.
All the earthly things or connections just left here, whether it's billions of dollars or tons of emotions.

But, as long as I am alive your poetry is something I won't be able to forget.

Beautifully put, Mark. I feel the same way! I hope people will not lose hope and find reasons to live...it's really difficult to die! Beautiful language here and touching message. Great piece.

This was a hard read for me, I had alot of suicide in my teenage years around me. This is beautifully written and made me cry. <3

-Mandy

Mark,
Such a powerful and really interesting right about 'the deed' it's a very grey subject and you have penned your piece delicately, but with emotion
Well done
Michael :)

Thankyou for reading this piece poets. This one is for you Kenny - I know your reading this somehow!

Dips ones head

Fantastic words mark

Craig

Mark - excellent piece.. I saw this was for someone obviously close to you.. I know they are out there reading it! Well done!

Beautiful

So very beautiful. Take care

Absolutely breathtaking. I shall cherish these words and hold them close to my heart. You have a beautiful soul! <3