Comments : Dance?

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Oh wow!! This is exciting and the speed of the rhythm is like a tango lol this is either a sensual piece or I'm just extremely ahem mind in gutter type of person if you get me

    • 8 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      I get you Em ... with you all the way ;-) lol
      Thank you x
      =^.^=

  • 8 years ago

    by Mark

    Just becoming a master of rhyme aren't you!! To convey such connection and mood is such a talent!

    • 8 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Aw thanks Mark :-) I'm so glad you liked it :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Kitty K

    This is a brilliant piece of rhyming, about a fight or a dance! Such a lovely flowing piece, which leaves the end with such intrigue.
    Really enjoyed reading this

    Much love
    Michael :)x

    • 8 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks Michael I really appreciate that. :-)
      I'm so glad you enjoyed it x
      =^.^=

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Super write. The verses are tighter, resulting in a better flow.

    A fight holds many similarities to a dance. I like the intrigue that the reader is left with.

    Well done.

    • 8 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Why thank you Mr Darcy, I appreciate your comments ...
      and I'm watching Strictly Come Dancing ... lol x
      =^.^=

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is excellent, Kitty and as Michael says, the verses are tight which lends an excellent rhythm to the poem and the rhymes are fluid because of that.

    Take care.

    • 8 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much Ben, so glad you liked it :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Kitty... What an exciting piece. Wonderful job!

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    What a nice and beautiful flow sure feels like a tango. Take care

  • 8 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    I guess this is Tango
    Beautiful

  • 8 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    This is such an amazing write, not everyone's kinda thing but it's deffo my kinda thing.

    May your fire continue to burn

    Craig

    Ps

    Only just seen this, I hope it gets picked up for the weekly contest

    Regards

    • 8 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Aw thanks Craig, I'm so glad it's your 'kinda thing' ;-) lol x
      =^.^=

    • 8 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Aw thanks Craig, I'm so glad it's your 'kinda thing' ;-) lol x
      =^.^=

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Kitty - A) i hope you dont mind me call you kitty.
    b) excellent write!! Loved it from begining to end. Loved the rhyming and the layout

    • 8 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Hello fellow crazy cat lady! Of course you can call me Kitty :-)
      Thanks for your lovely comments :-) x
      =^.^=
      Edit: you nominated it! Aw thank you sooo much .. how lovely! xx

  • 8 years ago

    by Robin Carretti

    JUST Quite divine lovely your writing hits my heart.