Love this Mark! Engaging and menacing. I love your otherworldly charm :-) great write x
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Its beautiful and dark. I'm mesmerized by your words. I love your poetry. Keep writing :)

Mark
How very well Dark (without meaning to rhyme)!
I enjoyed this.. there is a certain thing to your poetry that draws me in...
Well done.. Nominated.

Beautiful! :)

Hades oh ruler of my destined place and doom
I offer this bargain - that I again may bloom.

It's brilliant Mark.
Is it nominated?

Wow! Mark what a wonderful piece of writing
Well done fella
Michael :)

Wow... Such desire to be happy... Wonderfully expressed. Great presentation here, Mark... It's very effective. Lovely tone, great rhyming too. Great work.

My goodness... The third stanza is the most tight one here. All this is beautifully emotionally