Absolutely beautiful Free Verse. Alike your winning last piece - I had to read this over and over. I hope it gets nominated!

"The more she entertained you,
the more you tried to cage her;
You have never seen her worth
and
now when I look into your eyes,
I can't find her.''

That verse says so much..<3 I rate a 5/5

Shane this is outstanding and I'm hoping it gets nominated. Once she escapes from the cage she'll never go back to him ... just brilliant! x
=^.^=

Ps.
This really reminds me of a song by Keith Urban called " Stupid Boy" ... link here in case you want a listen. https://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/keithurban/stupidboy.html

Free verse

This is a beautifully written piece with wonderful imagery throughout, I really enjoyed reading the gentle flow and theme, and definitely worthy of my nomination :)
Well done
Michael :)

Shane, lovely write. Such a true tale, you have to give another a space to thrive and grow and in that they will love also.

Happy this was nominated, beautiful

Shane... Really wonderfully written. Well fone.

Beautiful piece. Very well written definitely going onto my favourites. Milly x

Beautiful. Glad its nominated