Michael!

"warmth
upon my skin; poured
from a yellow ochre well, that tilts
from a prodigious; blue ruffle "

I want to be in this place ... AND ... I want to get inside your head and have a jolly good rummage! I don't really have words for your amazing descriptions. I'm crossing my fingers that this receives the nomination it deserves. Just brilliant! X
=^.^=

Everything you write Michael reveals such a tender soul!!

This is a beautiful poem, Michael, which I will be saving to my favorites. High 5...

This is the type of day dream that I'd love to stay in for a very long time. Your imagery is just fantastic and the words paint such a beautiful picture for the reader. Nicely done!

The description, structure and imagery are amazing. The overall feel to this is so relaxed and the daydream is wondrous.

..I am taken unto..

..an aquatic ether;
a pearlescent secrecy;
where my eyes
bathe in
turquoise.

Beautiful, Michael.
It's heavenly experience.

"Where my eyes bathe in turquoise" I love this parte. Turquoise is my favorite color and I like what it represents. I was well drawn by this and so soothing. Thank you for sharing. All the best Michael. Add to my favorite

Wow, Michael... What a relaxing and invigorating write. I hope this grace the front page.. This is so beautifully done.

Beautiful emotional piece. Everything about it is wonderful. Loved it Milly x

Michael
Excellent piece.
Well penned.
Loving this layout
Reads well.
Fantastically vivid content.

All ticks from me.. well done