Comments : If i were a builder..

  • 2 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Wow Michael this is the truth so well spoken I so agree. To me the world has not changed it is the people making it rather uncomfortable to the point do our children have a future and if yes how would the future look like. There only one race and that is the human race. Why can't we just get along.? We are killing7 eachother and for what. I could go on but I may get carried away. Take care and be blessed.

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Dagmar
      What can we eh..?
      Its nice to feel what could be, and if that is all we have then so be it :)x

  • 2 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Michael - another excellent piece

  • 2 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Aw Michael this is lovely. If I were to elaborate it would sound very similar to Dagmar's comment, so I'll just say "what she said!" ;-)
    X
    =^.^=

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty K

      what was it Dagmar said again ;)x

  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow... So so wonderfully written Michael. You have a good heart, as shown by this piece here.

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Mel, that is a really nice thing to say, from your heart :)

  • 2 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Nominated. That's all I can describe it with

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Purvi,
      I'm pleased you enjoyed reading :) and for your nomination

  • 2 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Michael, this is one of the best poem read so far.
    Write few more poems like this.
    Favorites.
    And Michael you really are a genius.

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      That's a really nice compliment. Thank you FVerse :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Mark

    I really like the metaphor and how thoroughly you explored it....connecting construction terms to areas of life such as religion and poverty. From your poems and posts it is very clear you have a big heart Michael. Great write!

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Lovely comments and compliments Mark :)

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank Em
      Yes if only :)x

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mark, nice words :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    Absolutely love this Michael it's one of yours that stood out for me. If only it was so simple to be the type of builder you wish to be

    Take care
    Em xx

    Edit: is each meant to be together or is the h separate for affect?

  • 2 years ago

    by Brenda

    Lovely sentiment Michael. This write is so you-I love your sweet soul!

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Brenda :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Mark

    Congratulations Michael! So happy for you

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mark :)

  • 2 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Congratulations, Michael. If only, eh?

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      If only Mr D yes and thank you :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Congratulations Michael! I'm so glad this was one of the winners x
    =^.^=

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty K :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on your win

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar

  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congrats on your win, Michael! :-)

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Mel :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Congratulations , Michael.
    Well deserved

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you free verse :0

  • 2 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats Michael!!! :)

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you nams x :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Justen Smith

    Congrats. I really liked the metaphor of it.

    A well deserved win. :-)

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Justen :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Well done on the win with this excellent piece. What an imaginative approach. A truly beautiful write. If only we could live in a world like this. Milly x

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Milly x

  • 2 years ago

    by .k.u.s.h.q.u.e.e.n.c.j.

    This peice is nothing but greatness! Makes you think a little & wonder what life would be like if we all thought this way. This beauty is going to my favorites! (:

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Lovely comments CJT Thank you x

  • 1 year ago

    by Kireasha L

    All I can say is wow! Excellent piece, congrats on the win.

    -ki