Wow Michael this is the truth so well spoken I so agree. To me the world has not changed it is the people making it rather uncomfortable to the point do our children have a future and if yes how would the future look like. There only one race and that is the human race. Why can't we just get along.? We are killing7 eachother and for what. I could go on but I may get carried away. Take care and be blessed.

Michael - another excellent piece

Aw Michael this is lovely. If I were to elaborate it would sound very similar to Dagmar's comment, so I'll just say "what she said!" ;-)
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Wow... So so wonderfully written Michael. You have a good heart, as shown by this piece here.

Nominated. That's all I can describe it with

Michael, this is one of the best poem read so far.
Write few more poems like this.
Favorites.
And Michael you really are a genius.

I really like the metaphor and how thoroughly you explored it....connecting construction terms to areas of life such as religion and poverty. From your poems and posts it is very clear you have a big heart Michael. Great write!

Absolutely love this Michael it's one of yours that stood out for me. If only it was so simple to be the type of builder you wish to be

Take care
Em xx

Edit: is each meant to be together or is the h separate for affect?

Lovely sentiment Michael. This write is so you-I love your sweet soul!

Congratulations Michael! So happy for you

Congratulations, Michael. If only, eh?

Congratulations Michael! I'm so glad this was one of the winners x
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Congrats on your win

Congrats on your win, Michael! :-)

Congratulations , Michael.
Well deserved

Congrats Michael!!! :)

Congrats. I really liked the metaphor of it.

A well deserved win. :-)

Well done on the win with this excellent piece. What an imaginative approach. A truly beautiful write. If only we could live in a world like this. Milly x

This peice is nothing but greatness! Makes you think a little & wonder what life would be like if we all thought this way. This beauty is going to my favorites! (:

All I can say is wow! Excellent piece, congrats on the win.

-ki