Comments : Size matters

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I quite agree. Beds and sofas are the most important things with regards to size and comfort. An amusing light hearted piece that made me chuckle. Milly x

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      I am so glad I made you ladies giggle. I was feeling silly and from there I went. I totally agree Milly, beds and sofas are so important! lol....

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Yay! Loved this, Queen! Made me smile! The title is a temptation I just had to open. Joking. Hehe.

  • 8 years ago

    by ddavidd

    This is so witty, reminds me of Bernard Shaw:
    Once he had his hand in his pocket and asked the audience : "What do you think I am touching?"
    The crowd said: Mr. Shaw it is such an improper question. And Shaw goes : take your mind out of the gutter. I am touching my keys.
    Later he asked the same question, again having his hand in his pocket. They all responded : We know Mr. Show, you obviously are touching your keys again.
    Shaw goes: Wrong, actually I am touching now what you thought before.

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you! That is hilarious about Bernard Shaw. It's crazy what suggestion can do.

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    hahahah ! Love this Brenda!! made me giggle

  • 8 years ago

    by MoonMaiden

    Wowwww... Thats great! Lol. I was like no she didnt!! ..then i read a couch.. Thats funny !

  • 8 years ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    It goes both ways lmao. Great job Brenda

  • 8 years ago

    by Mark

    :D .... Very witty Brenda...you had me all the way till the last stanza.

  • 8 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Hahaha .... brilliant Brenda! Thanks for giving me a jolly good chuckle this morning :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 8 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Size really does matter but not For your poems.
    Whatever you write acrostic, rhyme, free verse, senyru, haiku... Everything beautiful.

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Thanks everyone! This was a lot of fun to write....Im so happy to put a smile on everyone's face..:)

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Brenda,

    You do pull some cracking pieces out of your bag of wonderful poetry. Full of humour and written with such a great flow. And good advice lady
    well done a great write
    Much love
    Michael :)x

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Michael, I am so happy you enjoyed this- good intel on a couch is so very important...")

  • 8 years ago

    by words2myself

    I enjoyed reading this :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much-I appreciate your comments-

  • 8 years ago

    by Mayday

    O_O

    um...yeah..pff....totally...what I was thinking....

    heh...o.o

    lOl

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Lol! Me too......

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Love your humour B had me in stitches :)

    Em. X

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thanks Em! I knew you would find this funny. We all got to laugh now and again. Hugs!

  • 8 years ago

    by h0peful

    Of course it was a couch.

    What else would it be?

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Well yeah.... a couch of course lol!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    HAHA, Brenda! Excellent stuff. This reminds me of Naomi's latest cookie piece

    'there's definitely something to be said for a self supported free standing unit.'

    ^^
    not sure why, but these lines definitely got me the most!

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Glad you liked it Ben! There truly is something to be said for the "self supported free standing unit"...just saying....:)

  • 8 years ago

    by Alice

    HA! At first I was like "eurgh, gross" and then I laughed

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Just a fun play on words. Thank you!

  • 8 years ago

    by Maher

    Lol I see what you did there. Very shifty, but also very good.

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Maher, why thank you sir, lol....I had a lot of fun writing this-

  • 8 years ago

    by Paul Hirst

    Lovely naughty twist

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Paul...makes you wonder doesn't it, lol?

  • 8 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Love this Brenda!

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Stephen, it was one of those days...