by Mark
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This is a marvelous acrostic on red roses as a token of love and affection. I'm really taken back by this, wonderful vocabulary... You've captured this classic romantic notion ...all with such few words. |
by Michael
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Thank you Marl and nice to read your comments, of how you put them across :) |
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Aw Michael ... and it's not even valentine's day! Lol |
by Michael
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Thank you Miss Kitty K |
by Ben Pickard
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Your use of language and delicate touch raises this acrostic far above the standard fare. Acrostics are too easy to just reel off without much thought other than to get that first letter of each line right; people are usually lazy when writing them which gives them their bad name. A good acrostic can be excellent and are never easy to execute. Yours are always excellent and never lazy. They are also always a pleasure to read. |
by Michael
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Thank you Ben, |
by Risqué
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I read this and feel like I've been carried away to a faraway beach... at night, with a dance floor, a little too much wine and someone wrapped around my arms. |
by Michael
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Risqué |
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Loved this sensual Acrostic. With vivid imagery my favourite In particular wad the endorphins seeking love. Milly x |
by Michael
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Thank you Miss Milly |
by Ya----Na
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Michael, very Beautifully you captured sensuality. |
by Michael
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Thank you free verse :) |
by mossgirl19
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I missed this beautiful acrostic. I will agree with Ben your acrostics are really well thought out. Take this one, this is amazing! |
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:O i also missed this!!! |