Love this small but punchy piece. Well thought out flowing with excellent rhyming and spot on content. Milly x |
by Paul Hirst
Thank You Milly that's very kind of you |
Love this small but punchy piece. Well thought out flowing with excellent rhyming and soot on content. Milly x |
I love the flow and the meaning behind it. Thanks for sharing and all the very best. Add to my favorite. |
by CânnâBîsh
The word that stuck with me here is powerful. What few lines & simple words have such meaning & emotion that go so far in depth here. This is amazing in every way. |
by Paul Hirst
Thank You CJT that's very kind of you |
by mossgirl19
I love this, Paul. I got a really strong feeling as I read this. Short but definitely hit the nail. |
by Paul Hirst
Thank You MG very kind and pun intended lol |
by Risqué
Such a powerful piece |
by Paul Hirst
Thank You very kind |
by C Cattaway
This made a great impact. Thankyou x |
by Paul Hirst
Thank You |
What an awesome write! I always enjoy a piece about Jesus. He is a common subject matter in much of what i write. This poem is concise and powerful a tremendous piece indeed. Great work! |