Comments : An Unfinished Curiosity

  • 8 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Love this

    Desire is a bugger at times especially if it's forbidden.

    • 8 years ago

      by Brise

      Thank you CJ! And it really is, wish I could've expressed it further but hey I haven't written poetry since I was a teenager :) Anyways thank you for your comment, I really appreciate your time ! :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    There is nothing wrong in desiring something.
    I loved this poem.

    • 8 years ago

      by Brise

      Thank you for your critique and your advice! and for your time ! :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    You're writing some really great poems Brise ... this one too!
    "Ring heavy upon my hand" ... great description of how it feels to crave that forbidden lust. Great title again too! :-)
    =^.^=

    • 8 years ago

      by Brise

      Thank you Kitty Cat Lady for taking your time to read my poems ! And I really appreciate your comment motivates me more :) Thank you !