Comments : Do you know what it's like?

  • 1 year ago

    by Robert Long

    The message in this is very direct and precise and I know exactly how you feel and all i can do is click the like button.
    On the other hand the rhythm was on key and didn't flaw so good job on that.
    All in all this is an excellent poem.
    If you ever need to talk im here for you.
    Keep in mind you're never alone and i wish you the best in life.

    -Robert Long

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Mahalia, this is heartfelt and wrenching and no, I don't know what that's like ... not all at once anyway :-(
    What I do know though is that being so in touch with how you feel and being able to express it so brilliantly will give you strength down the line. You already have more presence of mind than those making you feel 'less than'.
    The poem itself flows really well with lovely rhyming. Really well done x

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Nodding along here

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael


    A wonderful, but sad rhyming piece with a great end to your poem

    Michael :)

  • 1 year ago

    by brittany williams

    love this !!!!!

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Mahalia, a warm welcome to the site.

    It's always nice to read rhyming poetry that's well executed and this is excellent.

    Well done and all the best,


  • 1 year ago

    by Gwenyth Hill

    I can really relate to this poem. Great job, love the rhyming of it!

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Nice rhyming and sentiments that will resonate with many people. Milly x

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    Judging Comment

    Invisible and mute to the world! A voice caged but not
    heard or given an opportunity to be heard. Worst still been
    labeled and not given the chance to be heard rather, a misunderstood
    soul silently screaming to be seen, felt, touched and acknowledged.
    Its not just a touching poem but a painful one for someone to
    live through.