Comments : Sentimental value

  • 2 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Michael,
    What a sad piece about loss of love. I do like the lay out and the viauals are spot on.

    Well done

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks nams :)x

  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Michael,
    I became so sentimental after reading this. I really hate you for hurting me every single time with your heartbreaking pieces. :-)

    Ahh, you are so good at it, really. Added to my faves.

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      That's an ironic compliment Miss Mel
      thank you ;0x

  • 2 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ah Michael, such a cleverly woven poem.

    "My heart-

    oscillating to the
    rhythm of your
    mood swings"

    This is genius, although to be honest, I could have picked any line here. The last stanza is also perfect! Such an intricate tale of a heart misused. Added to faves x
    =^.^=

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty,
      for your lovely comments as always :)x

  • 2 years ago

    by Mark

    Just beautiful Michael. Great metaphors! I'm with Kitty, one could pick any line, great poetry

  • 2 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Well deserved nomination. You are really brilliant at producing mesmerising metaphors that grip the imagination. An excellent piece. Milly x

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Milly
      Lovely words as always :)x

  • 2 years ago

    by Mark

    Michael Congratulations! :')

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mark :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Scott Cole

    Congratulations on ur win!!!!!

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Scott and you too fella :)

  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congratulations on your win, Michael!!!

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Mel :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Well done Michael, congratulations :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty K x :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Congratulations Michael

  • 2 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on your win Michael

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Dagmar x

  • 2 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats on the win!!

  • 2 years ago

    by Maher

    Congrats on the win Michael. My favourite part was this:

    My heart -
    oscillating to the
    rhythm of your
    mood swings.

    I envy you sir. I wish the ones I dealt with had a rhythm :|

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Maher for lovely compliments...
      and I'm sure you do!

  • 2 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    A worthy win, Michael.

    Great write!

    The only thing that threw me off was "losing", it feels like it should be "lose".

    IdTakeABulletForYou

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you :)
      and yes I would agree with you, after reading again

  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    JUDGING COMMENTS:
    Sentimental value by Michael points 7
    This is probably going to be the shortest comment I've ever written but this piece was extremely moving and one which we could probably all relate to in some aspect. The rawness of the piece seemed to ooze off the tongue so much so that it hit me like a tonne of bricks. The words and styling (actually I cannot fault any of this) were just perfect in my opinion.

  • 2 years ago

    by Emily Wacker

    Congratulations on the win! Well-deserved!
    -Emily

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Emily :)x