Michael,
What a sad piece about loss of love. I do like the lay out and the viauals are spot on.

Well done

Michael,
I became so sentimental after reading this. I really hate you for hurting me every single time with your heartbreaking pieces. :-)

Ahh, you are so good at it, really. Added to my faves.

Ah Michael, such a cleverly woven poem.

"My heart-

oscillating to the
rhythm of your
mood swings"

This is genius, although to be honest, I could have picked any line here. The last stanza is also perfect! Such an intricate tale of a heart misused. Added to faves x
=^.^=

Just beautiful Michael. Great metaphors! I'm with Kitty, one could pick any line, great poetry

Well deserved nomination. You are really brilliant at producing mesmerising metaphors that grip the imagination. An excellent piece. Milly x

Michael Congratulations! :')

Congratulations on ur win!!!!!

Congratulations on your win, Michael!!!

Well done Michael, congratulations :-) x
=^.^=

Congratulations Michael

Congrats on your win Michael

Congrats on the win!!

Congrats on the win Michael. My favourite part was this:

My heart -
oscillating to the
rhythm of your
mood swings.

I envy you sir. I wish the ones I dealt with had a rhythm :|

A worthy win, Michael.

Great write!

The only thing that threw me off was "losing", it feels like it should be "lose".

IdTakeABulletForYou

JUDGING COMMENTS:
Sentimental value by Michael points 7
This is probably going to be the shortest comment I've ever written but this piece was extremely moving and one which we could probably all relate to in some aspect. The rawness of the piece seemed to ooze off the tongue so much so that it hit me like a tonne of bricks. The words and styling (actually I cannot fault any of this) were just perfect in my opinion.

Congratulations on the win! Well-deserved!
-Emily