Comments : Smashed (unfinished)

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I hit a wall with this one and nothing else would flow, so it's posted as is

    Craig

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Nothing wrong with posting as it is, Craig. That's what came and that's where it ended in your head...leave it there if I were you; it's honest.
    I can relate perfectly to this in all but the alcoholic beverage...a nice glass of red is more my tipple, but I have been known to sink a real ale from time to time.

    Take care, Craig

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thanks Ben.

      Real ale is my weapon of choice

      Craig

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This poses an interesting question Craig, of at what point does a harmless vice become harmful?
    I'm sure many of us can relate to this, especially the sleep bit.
    If you hadn't said, I wouldn't have thought it was unfinished. A thought provoking write :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thanks kitty.

      You kinda hit the nail on the head there

      Craig

  • 6 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Ohhh okay - i relate to this.. a hell of a lot..
    Excellent rhyming..
    Love the layout...

    Keep it under wraps though yea.. :) if you ever wanna chat. Just PM

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you.

      I accidentally made the lay out look like a bomb.

      Apt I suppose

      Craig x