Comments : Paths

  • 7 years ago

    by ddavidd

    Such a mature poetical language. I really enjoyed, specially the beginning.

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks David, glad you enjoyed it.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is excellent, Maher and shall receive my nomination on the morrow, good man!

    Take care and all the best as ever,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Many thanks, Mr Pickard. I'm glad you enjoyed it. All the best and better to you too, good Sir :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Maher, I'm not going to pretend that I fully understand this wonderful piece, but that doesn't seem to matter. The beautiful, poetic and lyrical words are just brilliant! Lovely piece :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you Cat Ma'am, glad you enjoyed it. Probably best out not be fully understood anyways :)

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    SC - Brilliant! I do hope she sees all these and realises just how much you would move the earth to be with her.. She is a lucky girl..

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks USB, glad you like it. I don't show her these but I can only hope she knows :) wouldn't say she's lucky though lol

    • 7 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      She is :P Dont argue with me haha!
      And im sure she knows :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A lovely romantic piece full of great imagery and emotion definitely needs to be nominated best wishes Milly

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Milly, glad you enjoyed it :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Maher,

    Another incredible piece from you.
    Beautiful my friend
    Michael :)

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Michael, glad you enjoyed it good Sir :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    *nominated

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you Mr Pickard. Very kind of you, my friend :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Maher, love, love, love this! Beautiful!

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Brenda, glad you like it :)

  • 7 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Judging comment:

    What a romantic poem! It seems to be written right from the heart of Aphrodite (the Goddess of love). It is beautiful; it is filled with emotion; it has heart melting imagery, and is every bit lovable. Beautiful.