There's a real sense of cutting loose about this piece, Naazz; finally saying, 'I've had enough and I am done with this'. Love can be wonderful but it can hold us as its desperate prisoners when things aren't right.
Well done and well rhymed, as usual with your work.
All the best,
3 years ago
This is so well written dear Naazz, way more mature wording than what I was writing in your age. Of course I am bilingual, perhaps in my mother tongue I could write as well as this,
The emotion displayed here so skillfully, is not unknown to any person with heart. Life is full of turbulences. It fluctuates the more it fluctuates the more it waverers and the more your wings experience the air and space. Waves mean ups and downs, without them without turbulences we would only be staring at still life paintings, instead of living it.