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  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I love this poem. You have captured exactly how important those four little letters are. I am so glad you have true love in your life. Best wishes Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much Milly. He truly is an amazing man and I am so truly blessed to have him in my life.

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Brenda,

    You never fail to amaze me with your poetry, and this one no exception. So lovely to read your feelings about your loving partner, and how you expressed it here.... MORE.MORE! haha
    Much love
    Michael :)x

    * tiny thing I noticed Brenda- 4th verse, 4th line, should it read 'he would move heaven and earth?* :)x

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Michael, thank you so much! He is my true love. Thank you for catching my typo. It's corrected and I am back on track!

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Oh b this brought a few tears to my eyes how very beautiful

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Em! He makes it easy to love and to feel loved.

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Aww, Queen! You are a happy lady this Valentines day! This is so sweet, so raw, so heartfelt.

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Lady Mel, thank you so much! I am a very happy lady every day!

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Enjoyed reading as always. All the best to you

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Dagmar! Hugs to you my friend-

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    Another sweet write! Love it love it love it! <3 <3

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Ren! I appreciate you!

  • 6 years ago

    by Martha Simons

    nise

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much!

  • 6 years ago

    by naaz

    Brenda, I wish I could have born 35 years earlier from the date of my birth.
    You are such an adorable person, one couldn't stop himself from loving you.

    You are right, this one word, really means so much. This 'one' word has the power to change lives, but only if it's true. It changed yours.
    Love can doom us too, but let just stay on the positive aspects of love or your poem revolving around it.

    Brenda, you always manage to surprise us with your simplicity and same goes with this one. You captured the whole essence of your poem in just four letters.

    Love is all about strength just as you mentioned. Strength to protect our loved ones from every negative thing could ever happen to them or to create heaven on earth for them and finally to be by their side in paradise too.
    Our dear ones are the reason behind that strength. Like you are my strength that's why I was able to write so much for a comment.

    Brenda, You didn't fail anywhere in this poem to give us the true idea, the real feeling of love.
    I just hope and pray it would display on the screen of Pnq Contest winners next week.

    All the best!
    Your true love, Naaz.
    Omg, even my name has just four letters.

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Naaz, thank you ever so much! You are too sweet, really. He truly makes me happy so it makes it easy. Our lives aren't complicated , we keep it simple and drama free. That's the key. I deeply appreciate all your kind words and thoughts. Hugs my friend!

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is all the comfort and safety a woman needs and wants
    when she knows and really knows her man is hers and she is his
    and together they look out for each other. A sweet and heart warming
    write...bless you both!

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Awww thank you Meena! He truly is that man! Hugs -

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Brenda,

    I remember writing a poem a number of years ago. In this poem I say 'I love you' whilst away from my lover. These 3 words drift and eventually find her open window, her ear. My words delivered.

    This poem of yours made me smile in the same way.

    Hugs x

    • 5 years ago

      by Brenda

      Michael, thank you so much! When I get these text I smile too- hugs!