Comments : Beautiful fate

  • 2 years ago

    by Michael

    Hi Trisha,
    Welcome to PnQ. This is a lovely piece, flowing with emotions
    with a beautiful ending.
    Well done
    Michael :)x

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I hope this gets nominated; it's a very well written piece indeed.

    All the very best,

    Ben

    • 2 years ago

      by Trisha Harris

      Thank you so much I am so happy to share this with ot

  • 2 years ago

    by Lemon Squeezy

    This is a truly wonderful write, Trisha great Job!

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben

    Simply Wonderful :) beautifully conveyed and presented !

    Epic :)

    B

  • 2 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Just as you gave your soul to look it alive.
    Trisha
    Keep on penning

  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Beautiful, Trisha.

  • 2 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Trisha, I really liked your poem, clearly inspired by one who has Faith as I do also. As I interpret it, the Ancient ones (Plural) are the Trinity who spoke the words: Let US make Man/Woman in our own image and likeness. You are a dreamer like Joseph who held onto his righteous walk with God, ran out his Robe when his Masters Wife grabbed him. Prophecy does say that; No good thing will I withhold from them who walk uprightly. Then through compassion's soul abounding,
    even dust shall gain salvation
    For the shepard gave his life to save his flock. Yes we are from the Dust of the ground, and Our Creator the Shepard did lay down his life for us, his Sheep. Put in my Favorites, glad it was Nominated! Great work!