An amazing metaphor. It's obvious you love your family very much.

Oh Craig, this is so swoon worthy....such a lovely write-

Amazing work :)

Craig,

you are writing some good pieces lately fella, glad to see this one on the board.

Michael :)

It's a lovely poem oozing with real love. Very romantic

Oooohhhh...this will indeed make the moon
intoxicated! I like the soft tone in this poem and the
flow is smooth with passion set aglow with each
line...lovely read!